divendres, 28 de setembre del 2012

MY LAST SUMMER HOLIDAYS



 TRANSCRIPTION:

Hi, My name is Mireia and I'm going to talk about my last summer holidays.

First I'm going to talk about Bournemouth.
Second I'm going to talk about Platja D'aro.
And Finally I'm going to talk about Banyoles and Mieres.

I stayed in Bournemouth for 3 weeks. I travelled there with Mònica, and another people from Barcelona, Vic... I stayed there in a host family with another girl from Brasil.
In the morning we practised a lot of activities, and in the afternoon we did classes. The first day we did and exam, the exam was very , very boring. Every evening we met all the people of my group and another people from other countries in a pub or in the beach. It was a really, really good experience, I miss a lot all the people I met there.

When I came back to Bournemouth I went to Platja D'aro and I stayed there 3 weeks. I met a lot of people there, Pau, Pol, Carla, Miquel and another friends with another cities but mainly in the first week, Núria. I went to the beach with Nuria and then we went to “LLAGUR”to eat, it's a ioghourt shop, It was delicious. Every night Nuria and me, and other people went to BLACK AND WHITE it's a disco, it was very funny. In the 2nd and 3rd weeks my cousin Berta arrived to Platja D'Aro, we went to the beach, shopping, cinema, disco... I spent a great time there.


After that, I stayed in Banyoles for 2 weeks more or less. I went to the “Club” with my friends and there we swam in the lake, we played cards... or I went to “La Draga” It's a park, I went with my friends too and there we met other people...
And finally I went to Mieres for the “Festa Major” it's a typical party. In Saturday evening every year there was a dinner and then a concert, but this year I have a party in Carlota's and Barbara's house.

It was a fantastic summer!


OBSERVATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATION:

PRESENTATION:
Did you use any resources? Yes, I used a resources.
Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes, I used a beautiful power point.
Dis you show/talk about the photos to the audience? Yes, I show the photos to the audience but I didn't talk with them.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT:
Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes, I look my audience most of the time.
Did you read from your notes? Not much, only 1 or 2 times.
Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of you audience? Not much, but sometimes I point one or two photos of my power point. 

STRUCTURE:
Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? No, I organize my ideas that have been ordered. 
Did you use discourse markers to make your ideas more clear? Yes, I use discourse markers.
Which ones? First, second, finally, after that...

CONTENT:
Did you introduce interesting information to your audience?  Yes, I introduce interesting information.
Did you look up informationc/facts/ideas in the internet/books...? No, I didn't.
Was your information more superficial or more detailed and original? I think the information was more superficial.

LANGUAGE:
Did you check your grammar? Yes, I check my grammar.
Did you use rich/new vocabulary looking up the dictionary? Yes, I use rich/new vocabulary.
Which ones? Manly...
Did you use sentence linkers? Yes, I use sentence linkers
Did you use fillers? Yes, I use fillers but not much.

PRONUNCIATION Y INTONATION:
Did you know how to pronounce all your words? yes, I know.
Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teaches? Yes, I check the pronunciation with my teacher.  
Did you change you tone of voice or use a monotone all the time? Depend, noramlly I change my tone.
Did you speed in a fluid continnum or with breaks and interruptions? I speed ina fluid continuum. 

SELF-EVALUATION:
You are your teacher! What mark did you get? I get a 7!

MY CLASS MATES:

Laia R: 1. Estartit   2. C.A.V.A   3. Satna Cristina
Marta O: 1. England   2. Italy (Roma)   3. Tossa
Blanca: 1. Camp Nashova North   2. Perú   3. Pals
Mireia F: 1. Albena   2. Estartit   3. Banyoles
Jordi B: 1.England   2. Hamburg   3. Prepared for the shool
Bernat D: 1. Can Toni  2. England   3. Platja D'Aro - Banyoles
Mònica: 1. bournemouth  2. Camp   3. Escala
Marta T: 1. Valencia   2. Roses   3. Return to her house
Núria: 1. Poole   2. Platja D'Aro   3 Pamplona, Vitòria and Sagarossa
Pau: 1. England (Plymouth)   2. Platja D'Aro   3. Football Season
Enric: 1. Banyoles - Sitjes   2. Croacia, Eslovènia   3. REturned to Banyoles
Elena: 1. England (Poole)   2. Cruise   3. Barcelona - Banyoles 
Carlota: 1. Turquia   2. Cadaques   3. Banyoles
Esther: 1. Camping  2. Alguera   3. Granda